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I have an itch I just can’t scratch
I was there, and oh boy did I watch you…
knock, knock knock!
knocked on every door in your house on the prairie
but you still couldn’t find yourself.

lean on me, or even collapse!
in to me, on to me,
why cant you let me fall with you?
leave the house on the prairie and be comforted by coconut arms
sandy palms and I will stare into your sky blue eyes.

Between the folds of sand dunes,
milky white, skin kissing skin kissing sand.
There’s so much more to treasure…

Let me be key.
©2007-2010 ~Paris-Violence
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:iconlyraalluse:
I like the imagery and the allusion of the key. Nice work!

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This is the story of a girl who made her dreams come true after she came to posses a magic art kit and many artistic gifts were bestowed upon her.
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thankyou! :D

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F**k Paris Hilton, get yourself some ~Paris-Violence

:iconlyraalluse:
NP ^_^

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This is the story of a girl who made her dreams come true after she came to posses a magic art kit and many artistic gifts were bestowed upon her.
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Proud member of the Writers-Club! [link]
:iconcybador:
Aww! This sounds so loving and so sweet! You're so great, Laura pie :)

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Like Superman with kryptonite up his ass, that's not going to fly.
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:hug: thankyou xxx

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F**k Paris Hilton, get yourself some ~Paris-Violence

:iconcybador:
Hugs ahoy! ^_^

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Like Superman with kryptonite up his ass, that's not going to fly.
:iconfree-bird:
love the last stanza in particular, very clever :)

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take a whiff on me take a whiff on me
everybody take a whiff on me
i said a hey
hey
baby take a whiff on me
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thankyou! xxxxx

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F**k Paris Hilton, get yourself some ~Paris-Violence

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goregous language and i think you capture something here. i don't know about anyone else, but i long to be someone's 'key', the person that they love for unlocking something deep within or a side to them they've never shared with them.

:+fav: xx
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:D thankyou so much amy :heart:

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F**k Paris Hilton, get yourself some ~Paris-Violence

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